Deals to Die for

The Sheriff Department head to Pleasance Malls to investigate a strange murder only to find themselves trapped inside. With a killer on the loose will they be able to stop it in time

Hook
We open on the men's section of a generic clothing store. The camera focuses on a changing room sign attached to the ceiling before panning down to show a lone, young woman. She is staring at her phone with a glazed look of boredom across her face. She types rapidly on the keypad and we see a text: Did you get lost back there? Complete with a winking face. As she looks up from her phone her gaze is drawn towards the full length mirror across from her. After a brief glance around a cheeky grin spreads across her face. Cue a brief montage of funny things to do in front of a mirror. As she shuffles out in front of the mirror wearing at least 15 shirts we see a large figure standing over her. This figure is shrouded in shadows. Roughly human sized, it's long arms end not with hands, but with cruel serrated blades. The woman screams and spins to meet the creature.

From the woman's perspective we see that the space where the figure was stands empty and across the changing room a man approaches with his arms full of clothes. The woman looks down and we see a red patch rapidly staining it's way through the multiple shirts. She presses her hand to the wound and pulls it off, her hands stained red. She looks back up as her vision begins to blur. She starts to fall and through a distorted lense we see the man in the changing room drop the clothes and run towards her. Fade to black. 'Dana, Dana!' The man shouts. A scream.

Jay's Vision
You stand alone in a brightly lit room. An endless sea of reflections fill the space, staring  back at you with a familiar stony gaze. A hall of mirrors with no end in sight. Suddenly, the hairs on the back of your neck stand on end. You feel as though something else is watching you and a deep feeling of fear fills you. You begin to run but every time you start to get into your stride you crash into another mirror. It feels as though you have been running for hours, your legs are beginning to give out, your chest burns from overexertion and you struggle to breathe